[Fanfiction] Interlude: The Problem with Fairy Godmothers

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Title: Interlude: The Problem with Fairy Godmothers
Author/Artist: Theos99
Characters/Pairings: AmericaxEngland, hints of SpainxRomano, FrancexCanada, one-sided RussiaxLithuania, LithuaniaxPoland, one-sided BelarusxRussia, and GermanyxItaly
Rating/Warnings: T
Summary: In which Arthur finds himself in need of a substitute fairy godmother. (Set to take place between chapters 1 and 2 of The Golden Goose)

http://theos99.livejournal.com/4273.html

Comments

[moredamnlies.livejournal.com]

I like Arthur's affection for Matthew and the secret admission of Alfred's good qualities.

One rather large Brit-pick though, Ludwug wouldn't go bollocks. Arthur might exclaim 'bollocks' or he might say someone's 'bollocksed it up' or call a good thing the 'dog's bollocks' but if Ludwig's at the risk of going mad he might 'go barmy' or 'be driven up the wall'.

Sorry to be so vehement on this subject, but swearing is a noble and precise art.